Wednesday, 16 March 2016

The New Zealand Flag

                                               The New Zealand Flag

WALT: Write a persuasive text that will persuade others-Persuasive others
In my opinion we should keep the current New Zealand flag

The first reason I think that we should keep the current flag is that we are in the British colony. If we change the flag the British might thought that everyone in New Zealand have forgot about everyone in Britain and might start a war against New Zealand. If we go to war with another country we might not get troops from Britain because we would have changed the flag.

The most important reason why we should keep the current flag is that people risked their lives for that flag. If we change the current flag we will soon forget all the soldiers who went to war. Imagine if you were one of those soldiers that went to war to keep that flag and died but now it’s becoming history how would you feel about that?

My final reason for keeping the current flag is Its wasting lots and lots of money, $26 million in fact. We could have used that money on poor families giving them a home and food so they can live a happy life. We can give kids an education so again they have a happy life.

So in conclusion I think that we should keep the current flag.Has this text changed your mind

The New Zealand Flag Solo Matrix
I know I used extended abstract really well because I asked question and had lots of different reasons of why we should keep the flag

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